Poems
16.03.2010 / 21.42 pm
 
by Molaire Jules
Rating: 2.27
Votes: 11
You're still here?
What, fourty nine years wasn't enough?
What you want from me? a Kidney?

You already killed my Liver.
You shot it with all that disgusting greasy food.
Now you want the rest of my life span too?

You know I love you,
But my Heart doesn't.
The only way that'll be,
Is when I buy a new one from the Flea Market:
CHOLESTEROL FREE!


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pepples at 2008-09-22

I do not find this peom cute at all. I think is very nasty and I would not even think to give it to no one at all.

no one at 2008-10-03

This poem is pretty much a hate letter. Nothing loving what so ever.

Niki at 2009-02-16

Wow, wasn't what I was expecting at all.
I thought at 50yrs you are celebrating, the years not regreting them. Terrible poem
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