Poems
02.09.2010 / 19.10 pm
 
by Mary
Rating: 4.57
Votes: 21
Why is it that you know me so well?
Why do you understand things before I have to tell?
Why does it feel like I know you for years?
Why with you I have no fears?
Why did I fall in love with only words so sweet?
Believe me YOU are the only one I need.


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Shabbydude at 2010-03-15

Why would you abandon your rhyme scheme at the end of your poem? Why would you write with such atrocious grammar? Why do I bother reading and critiquing poems on this website?
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