Poems
09.09.2010 / 11.45 am
 
by michelle daniels
Rating: 4.30
Votes: 10
there once was a boy
who loved me so
but now i have to let him go
he sat a girl upon his knee
and told her things
he never told me
i went back home
from school that day
not one word to my mother i say
my father came home from work that night
he looked for me
left center and right
he came to my door
my door he broke
and saw me hanging form a rope
he grabed a knife to cut me down
and on the ground a letter he found

the letter said:

dig a grave
dig it deep
place this letter
at my feet
on this letter i drew a dove
to shiw the world
i died for love.


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Alisa at 2008-11-13

Hello! my name is Alisa and I'm writing u to tell u that ur poem is really nice and i like how u had rhythm with it too. One question was it had for u to write this poem and did u write it on paper first and then type it up?

Thank You for reading my short message!

C.J. (ForeverNever) at 2008-11-17

Wow, this poems is really good. It has a beat to it that's just easy to flow into. I like the meaning, which I'm guessing is love is important and it's just an amazing and powerful thing. Keep writing!
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