Poems
12.03.2010 / 07.59 am
 
by steve
Rating: 4.17
Votes: 6
I cut out my eyes to prevent seeing what I no longer have. I cut off my tounge to keep it from saying I Love You. I cut off my fingers as a remedy for longing to touch your skin. I cut the ears from my head to hide your beautiful laughter. I cut off my legs to end the desire to walk by your side. I cut off my nose to spite my face. I cut out my stomach to free the butterflies I get when you're near. I cut off my arms because they ache to hold you close. I cut off my lips,they need to be pressed to yours. I cut off my head cuz it dreams to rest on your shoulder. I cut out my heart because it has turned black!


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Beckage at 2010-01-28

Im in tears!!! this is the first poem in a very very long time that has made me weep.

Kelsey at 2010-02-20

wow..this is an amazing poem..I'm speechless.

Sasha at 2010-03-04

I love this poem. It reminds me of someone terribly. Even though if it were one night of romance, it's a night i'll never forget. And the way you brought everything together just made sense, and i must say it's amazing.

Leigh Cheri at 2010-03-10

Hey I also write poetry and I have to say this is a great poem!! Its the same style I write which gives me a very deep appreciation for your talent! Amazing!
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