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| by steve |
Rating: 4.17 Votes: 6 |
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I cut out my eyes to prevent seeing what I no longer have. I cut off my tounge to keep it from saying I Love You. I cut off my fingers as a remedy for longing to touch your skin. I cut the ears from my head to hide your beautiful laughter. I cut off my legs to end the desire to walk by your side. I cut off my nose to spite my face. I cut out my stomach to free the butterflies I get when you're near. I cut off my arms because they ache to hold you close. I cut off my lips,they need to be pressed to yours. I cut off my head cuz it dreams to rest on your shoulder. I cut out my heart because it has turned black!
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Comments of this poem (4)
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| Im in tears!!! this is the first poem in a very very long time that has made me weep. |
Kelsey at 2010-02-20 |
| wow..this is an amazing poem..I'm speechless. |
Sasha at 2010-03-04 |
| I love this poem. It reminds me of someone terribly. Even though if it were one night of romance, it's a night i'll never forget. And the way you brought everything together just made sense, and i must say it's amazing. |
Leigh Cheri at 2010-03-10 |
| Hey I also write poetry and I have to say this is a great poem!! Its the same style I write which gives me a very deep appreciation for your talent! Amazing! |
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