Poems
16.03.2010 / 09.02 am
 
by caro
Rating: 4.63
Votes: 19
It seems like only yesterday,
you wiped away my tears.
Helped me grow and watched me play,
what happend to those years?

You were always there,for every step I`d take,
Though you know it`s just another step away from you.
I remember as you walked me through the gate,
my very first day of school.

As I slip my hand from yours,
a tear rolled down her face.
I didnt understand,I didnt know,that bit by bit my mommies heart tores.

Why was I so blind?was it just a faze?
cause look where I am now, it`s almost time to go,almost too late.
There is so little time left and I cant help but gaze,
mommy,I wish we had more time,I dont care about my fate.

But like you said,I cant always look back,
I am who I am all because of you.
And you`re not that bad,gotta cut you some slack..,
Well,it all comes down to this.Though i dont have enough time to say it all:thank you mommy,
I love you too.


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miss bumble deer at 2008-09-30

thast a really good poem !!! =)

julia at 2009-01-06

A touching one. Got to shed tears rolled on my cheeks. I lost my mom a month ago and this poem reminded me of her everlasting love tht will shine through my heart 4ever. An excellent work!!

Debbie at 2009-12-31

I realy liked this poem. It touched my heart. This reminds me of my mom and I..we were always close to each other. She passed away on Sept. 7, 2009, from cancer. OMG how much do I miss her. There's so many times that I really needed to talk to her. I do talk to her in Heaven, tho.

R.I.P. MOM..I LOVE YOU AND MISS YOU VERY MUCH. XOXOXO
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