My Special Mum |
| by Brittany |
Rating: 3.97
Votes: 70 |
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I miss my mum most of all,
it seems that without her I always fall.
Its weird not having her around,
lifes so difficult is what I've found.
Everythings hard, my head is all mixed,
unless she comes back things can't be fixed.
I wish things were back to the way that they were,
the times when my life revolved around her.
Although its been good to be on my own,
its just not the same i feel so alone.
I know that sometimes things seemed so bad,
but its not the same to just have a dad.
My mum is so special shes really the best,
she can't be compared to all of the rest.
Sometimes we fought over things that were dumb,
But none of that matters shes my special mum.
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Comments of this poem (21)
barbara at 2008-04-10 |
| very nice |
Amber at 2008-05-11 |
| This poem is really good.....i like it alot...you should write more poems |
kate at 2008-05-16 |
I know that sometimes things seemed so bad,
but its not the same to just have a dad.
i love this. |
Emileigh at 2008-07-08 |
I luv poetry and i think that is a really good poem.. i really like it.. That is awesome
It's very nice |
anie at 2008-09-30 |
thiss is soooo niceee and thoughtfull, i swear man its soo totching nd comforting and i loved this poem out of all the mum poems i have read its just so true and down to earth and love the part where it says Sometimes we fought over things that were dumb,
But none of that matters shes my special mum. sooo truee and niceeee thjis poem isss its the best! |
Natalie at 2008-10-28 |
I loved your poem
its very true !
x |
Karen at 2008-10-28 |
| My mum died a few days ago and your poem says exactly how I feel. I hope you dont mind I am going to say this at her funeral. |
Meerzy at 2008-12-23 |
| Wow this poem iz so much how i feel bout my mum i hate not havin her here with me!! U shuld soo rite more man well congratez itz a wikk poem!! |
chloe :) at 2009-01-02 |
| Thats realy good and so true ! well done ! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx |
Tara at 2009-01-22 |
| I moved out about a year ago and now I stay wid my dad. I think about my mom every day and your poem made me realize that nothing so far was right because I'm not with her. I havent talk to her in about 3 months, but when I get home today I'm going to call her and tell her that I love her and miss her very much. |
olivia at 2009-02-13 |
| is really sweet it made me cry |
manda at 2009-03-27 |
| Thats so sweet you should keep writting seriously |
christina at 2009-03-30 |
| i love this poem, so true be gratefull for what weve got i say xx |
nat at 2009-05-02 |
| i llike your poem its so true for me |
sophie at 2009-05-06 |
| you are so write i moved out of home about a year ago and i live with my dad. I got to see her for the first time last week for the first time in a year. its difficult coz she lives one side of the country and i live the other. thankyou for making me relize tht i appreat th thanx x |
Nicky at 2009-08-26 |
| I thought this poem was excellant... very true and stright from the heart ... well done xx |
famzi at 2009-10-07 |
| awwwww thats such a touchin poem....made me cry...i lost my mum month ago...i no da pain 2 lose a mum...it kills insyd |
fam at 2009-10-07 |
| this is such a sweet poem. it was so touching. made me cry. i lost my mum a month ago so i know how it feels to lose a special mother. life without her is nothing. |
amina at 2009-12-22 |
| you poem was amazin i really think the same x |
jolissa` at 2010-01-07 |
| omg this was such of the cutest poems ive ever heard lol |
Anamika at 2010-02-27 |
| i really loved it.see,my mom is a doctor and both my parents were transferred to the same place when i was 4 yrs old.they live in the north whereas i live in the south with my grandparents and elder sis.we do meet after a period of 2-3 weeks but only for 2 days.so this poem suits me.u have really done a nice job. |
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