Poems
17.03.2010 / 22.39 pm
 
by enolA
Rating: 5.00
Votes: 1
When you read my name backwards you can tell how I feel.
You can look in my eyes and tell that it's real.
I've made a mistake, this much I know.
And my eyes stray down, tears falling like snow.
Tomorrow night, you will dance with that girl.
My face and my name forgot in your world.
On Sunday we'll talk, I'm not sure what you'll say.
I'm not sure if I can wait these two days.
The river outside is inviting me now.
No more pain, I can't hurt you, it's pulling me down.
But I will wait out of respect for you,
And what ever you decide to do.
If you decide that she is first place.
That these eight months have been a waste.
If you want me out of your life.
I'll take my leap and become the River's wife.


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Hidan! at 2010-02-17

Beautiful. Love the emotion and the creativity. Much better than the classic love poem. I get bored reading the same thing over and over again, so great job!
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